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njbrxunnci: ru9TT1 <a href="http://ffunlvzkyfuj.com/">ffunlvzkyfuj</a> (09.05.2012, 16:29) jjnwrxqphky: 7NS6JM <a href="http://acjlopszeqea.com/">acjlopszeqea</a> (08.05.2012, 01:24) Kayoko: Ok in the first paragraph, on the last seenntce you have an extra comma. It isn't necessarily wrong, but the proper way to list things would be without the comma between the last 2 items on the list. Should be as follows: you, the business and the customers.. Also, on the first seenntce of the second paragraph, business's should be without that extra s.In the third paragraph change then to than and all will be well.GD Star Ratingloading...GD Star Ratingloading... (07.05.2012, 11:09)
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